http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword The Literary E-zine of Penn State York Wed, 27 Apr 2011 13:00:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/2011/04/a-heart-and-its-home-by-matthew-cocco/comment-page-1/#comment-5278 Ashlee Geib Wed, 27 Apr 2011 13:00:11 +0000 http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/?p=171#comment-5278 Lovely.

]]> http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/2010/04/comfort-in-the-absence-of-light-by-sascha-frost/comment-page-1/#comment-4512 John Marsten Tue, 02 Nov 2010 19:55:58 +0000 http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/?p=127#comment-4512 im sort of confused by the fourth stanza. if you’re describing how pleasant the night is, then why do you say that the “air tastes stale as ash?” hmmmmm im kind of lost on that one

]]> http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/2010/04/release-the-catch-by-douglas-brick/comment-page-1/#comment-3731 rebecca j. Wed, 30 Jun 2010 18:31:33 +0000 http://www2.yk.psu.edu/anyotherword/?p=124#comment-3731 I know poetry – and comments on an author’s works – are very personal things, so I hope my thoughts are not obtrusive if I share them.
Wow. I was entirely captured by the descriptions and the choice of small, but descriptive vocabulary. Usually I prefer poems that have a certain candence and rhythm but I think sing-song rhymig words would have taken away from the impact.

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